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美国景观建筑硕士高端录取:托福97G31

2021-07-26...

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深刻的思考为文书加入灵魂


申请类型

研究生

教育经历

 浙江大学 园林 本科 3.7/4.0

语言/标化考试成绩

toefl 97, gre 310+3

工作经历

实习经历

hangzhou yueting technology co., ltd., hangzhouassistant designer

w participated in the "green garden" project which aimed to complete the construction of 100 community gardens in hangzhou, provide urban residents with opportunities to experience nature and promote the mature development of nature education

w in charge of the design of a garden and relevant investigation work of “qiuxueli” residential community

科研经历

zhejiang university srtp project:research on urban industrial relic renewal

initiator&groupleader;

w conducted a large number of field investigations of industrial sites in germany, shanghai, and hangzhou

w through comparative studies at home and abroad, proposed a general overview of the renewal and transformation plan of hangzhou industrial sites and the concrete practice design plans of hangzhou silk alliance 166 creative industry park and hangzhou banshan steel plant base

w completed a research paper and won “excellent” grade in the oral defense

奖项/证书

  1. zhejiang province governmental scholarship, 2ndprize of student outstanding scholarship, outstanding student scholarship 2ndprize, specialty scholarship excellent award;

  2. 1stprize of student outstanding scholarship, outstanding student scholarship 1stprize, specialty scholarship excellent award;__

  3. chunzhen international exchange scholarship

申请结果

university of southern california

master of landscape architecture

录取

cornell university

master of landscape architecture

录取

university of virginia

master of landscape architecture

录取

university of washington

master of landscape architecture

拒录

university of illinois, urbana-champaign

master of landscape architecture

录取

university of michigan, ann arbor

master of landscape architecture

录取

pennsylvania state university, university park

master of landscape architecture

拒录

university of florida

master of landscape architecture

录取

texas a&m university, college

master of landscape architecture

录取

背景分析

学生优势:gpa比较高,多次获得奖学金

学生劣势:标化成绩较低

文书思路

学生在杭州长大,有对父辈和自己成长的地方不断变迁的感悟。我通过查询了解到“西湖十景”--苏堤春晓、曲院风荷、平湖秋月、断桥残雪、柳浪闻莺、花港观鱼、雷峰夕照、双峰插云、南屏晚钟、三潭印月。这让我有了灵感,细品每个四字词语均是意象生动,画面感满满,我决定以此作为开头,因此特意选取了三个包含建筑,建筑融合于风景中的词-“漫步在断桥上,感受着脚下咯吱咯吱的雪声……”这些是从小就给学生留下的这座城的印象,到后来上大学读了园林专业后开始从专业的角度来重新审视这座城市的景观建筑设计。除了写本科阶段掌握的知识技能,还列举了自己在参与到关于城市工业废弃地更新的研究项目时在欧洲考察观察到和思考的相关案例。接下来描写实习中参与到的一个社区花园的项目,也挑选作品集中的项目做进一步阐释。作为一个和历史文化紧密相连的专业,文书写作中也在每一个案例和项目中都添加自己的思考或写出项目制作灵感和目的,使文书充盈丰富起来。

申请总结

追求和申请专业一致的气质,加入深刻的思考为文书加入灵魂。


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