申请类型
研究生
教育经历
2016/09-2020/06西南财经大学金融专业 本科3.2
语言/标化考试成绩
雅思：7；gre: 322
工作经历
无
实习经历
aiesec enterprise management consulting co., ltd., chengdu branch
vice president of department of marketing; 21hours/week01/2018-01/2019
ÿ set an annual goal and made plans based on the previous data.
ÿ analyzed the target consumers through market research, data analysis and one-on-one interviews.
ÿ planned marketing activities according to user portraits, successfully expanding our business to the new market in sichuan university and achieving the goal of 100+ people signing up for the event within one day.
ÿ led the team to achieve the performance exceeding the target rate by 20%, and 60% higher than that of the last year.
ÿ managed the aiesec chengdu wechat public platform, leading to 300 average article views and 857 new followers of the platforms.
sales group leader of overseas talent introduction department; 21 hours/week
09/2017-12/2017
ÿ led a sales team of four people and trained all the team members.
ÿ built the information management system and managed projects through the software of hubspot and salesforce.
ÿ led the team to sign contracts with two companies and introduced foreign talents that matched them.
ÿ accompanied the team members to communicate with the leader of department of human resource.
salesperson of overseas talent introduction department; 28 hours/week
03/2017-07/2017
ÿ conducted market analysis through software of hubspot and salesforce.
ÿ talked with the target companies over the telephone and made appointment with them to speak face to face.
ÿ introduced the matched foreign talents to companies and signed contracts on talent introduction with them.
科研经历
无
奖项/证书
academic scholarship 09/2019
academic scholarship 03/2017
申请结果
wake forest university
ms in business analytics
终止
washington university in st. louis
ms in business analytics
终止
university of rochester
ms in business analytics
录取
johns hopkins university
ms in business analytics and risk management
录取
fordham university
ms in business analytics
录取
university of southern california
ms in business analytics
拒录
brandeis university
ms in business analytics
拒录
university of california, irvine
ms in business analytics
拒录
university of washington
ms in business analytics
拒录
syracuse university
ms in business analytics
录取
背景分析
学生优势：gpa，语言，gre没有拖后腿
学生劣势：同时gpa，语言，gre都不是很突出。
文书思路
essay 1 ﹙required﹚: in 250–500 words total, respond to the following prompts:
· describe your short-term and long-term goals for post mba or post ms.
· identify a back-up plan should your short-term goal not be immediately attainable.
· how does your past education and experience support your career objectives?
· what aspects of your intended simon business school program make it a good choice for your graduate study?*
因为只有250-500词的空间，所以文书基本在回答问题，没有多余的阐述，否则容易超字数。学生短期希望在互联网公司做市场分析专员，锻炼一定时间后考虑创业，开一家小型咨询公司，专为小型企业和个人提供对口服务，价格更优惠。如果毕业后没能找到理想的工作，则在目标企业申请其它岗位，反思没有应聘上的原因，同时进一步提升自己，在做好自己的本职工作基础上找机会进入自己喜欢的岗位。
学生早在大一期间做销售实习时就认识到市场分析能提高工作效率。当上市场部执行副主席后用简单的数据分析做过市场分析，并且用python建立了微信自动回复功能，从而提高了整个团队的工作效率。这段经历使自己对ba产生浓厚的兴趣。大学阶段通过课程，学到了python, matlab等编程语言在分析中的重要作用，在sas 的ba项目中学以致用，这些经历都为实现职业目标奠定了基础，同时也让自己意识到缺乏编程和实践经验，需要进一步提升。
而西蒙商学院的项目不论从课程设置，教学理念还是实践，都符合自己的需求，而且就业指导服务和数据分析俱乐部也为自己提供更多帮助。因此，十分希望加入西蒙商学院。
essay 2 ﹙required﹚: in 25 words or less, provide us with an interesting fact about yourself not expressed elsewhere in your application. ﹙25 word limit﹚*
学生的生日是一月一日，很容易被记住，同时也认为自己很特别和幸运。
essay 3 ﹙optional﹚: share additional information you think is important in the evaluation of your application, including any concerns you think the admissions committee may have regarding your candidacy. ﹙500 word limit﹚
学生用这篇文书解释了自己是一个什么样的人，用三个词形容自己，分别是好奇，以解决问题为导向，世界公民。在解释这三个词的过程中通过对性格的阐述最后回归到自己非常适合ba这个专业。
申请总结
这个学生的三维成绩都合格，但并不突出，而且申的是ba这个专业，前三十的学校处于录取和拒录的边缘。但学生胜在有想法，而且有实打实的实践经验，具体实践事例不空泛，而且非常有自己的想法，为申请增加了很多优势。
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